their pretend sunshine
on a street somewhat like yours.
Whom can we trust
when a smiling anchor
prophesies the utmost danger
around the corner
–From the title poem of Local News from Someplace Else, by Marjorie Maddox
Please don’t think I’m exaggerating when I say that Local News from Someplace Else by Marjorie Maddox is one of the best and most nourishing poetry collections I’ve read in quite some time. Cancer, murder, poverty, 9/11, Hurricanes Sandy and Katrina, mine cave-ins, lighting strikes and railway disasters, even the specter of Death himself, dressed up as children–or is it children dressed up as death?–all of these play more than mere cameo roles in her new collection of poems Local News from Someplace Else.
I’ve been featuring some highlights from her new book leading up to this review and last time I featured my reading of her poem “Meteorology.” You can read a discussion with the poet about that piece on TweetSpeak . And to know a bit of her story in her own words, you can delve into Marjorie’s own “Journey Into Poetry” on TweetSpeak as they featured previews of the book this summer. Just before Halloween, I read “Treat,” also from the Local News collection.
I’ve devoured the entire book at least three times since it came out early this fall, so it’s high time I got around to telling you about it in-depth.
Summer is going very quickly. We are
very busy. My brother and his family all
died in a plane crash. Hope to see you
soon when we fly that way . . .
These lines, from the poem “Postcard,” start the book with a lightly delivered nudge in the ribs about the dark realities between the lines of our letters, the shadows in our vacation photos, remembering “The plane was the same / as JFK Jr’s.”
One the quandaries contemporary poets have involves hashing through all the discussions about what poetry is and what it should do, from the tirades about form, rhyme, meter, and free-verse to the debates over accessibility versus complexity, the tensions between substance and form, relatability and ambiguity, to wading through all of the various opinions and judgments about what has become a somewhat obscure art (currently in the midst of a cultural comeback, one could argue), or in putting all of that hubbub aside and simply doing it, producing poems that have both soul and artistry that hit us in the gut or tingle our nerves, taking themselves seriously without becoming maudlin.
This is especially true of poems about tragedy, whether it be personal, national or global. How does one write about suffering and pain without the pain and suffering muddling up the works? It’s difficult to find words when we are hurting, when we cannot think clearly how to communicate our experience in a way that is productive, not to mention delightful or surprising? Handling these challenges is what Maddox does with great skill.
What we hold
is ourselves holding on,
the language of letting go.
–“The Time Is Midnight”
I remember being a child and wrecking my bike. I was bleeding and in pain, balled-up on the sidewalk yelling at my brother to keep away. How could I explain that his touching my leg, asking if it hurt, his constant urging of me to answer–how could I relay to him that it was just making the situation worse and that I needed a moment for the pain to die down before I could think or react rationally? Fortunately, my sister understood and waited quietly for my crying to diminish before she approached and gently offered aid in practical and noninvasive ways.
What baffled and frustrated my brother seemed to come easily to my sister, and so with Maddox’s poems. Like my sister she is not afraid to wait, not so long that she misses the chance to be relevant, but not acting so quickly as to place her hand too firmly on the wound and hurt us more. She has obviously let these griefs sink in deeply before reaching for her pen. As in these lines
This is what Wordsworth was getting at when he said that poetry “takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.” Much of what people write and call poetry either revels too much in blood and guts, or tries to stand at too far an intellectual distance from it. It’s not that Whitman’s “barbaric yawp,”or Ginsberg’s generational “Howl” don’t need to be voiced, it’s just that the quality of their work argues that both poets actually put a great deal of time and thought into those guttural noises before they were completely crafted on the page. And while you might argue that each went a bit over the top at times, it’s still obvious that their work is remembered not just for its noise but for its artistry, and for the poets’ skill.
Marjorie’s poems are neither preachy nor pedagogical, and she never comes off as a life-coach. Yet I found this collection profoundly helpful during what was a difficult season for my family and close circle of friends, comforting in the way that good poems can comfort, reminding you that you are not alone, and helping you to see the familiar in the unexpected, enriching not only in the soul of their content but in the beauty of their form.
From the shaped poems “Sixteen-Inch Black-and-White” and “March 16,” to the music of slant rhymes and alliteration in poems like “First Snow” and “After,” Maddox has a deft hand for form, rhythm, and sound play. Good free verse isn’t so free and easy, but she makes it seem like it is.
Listen. You’re breathing
again. The wind flip-flopped past
your chin, leapt off your tongue,
dove head-first toward the lungs
that heaved with the breeze.
Maddox is a natural at striking balance between touching on the pain of what we fear most and skillfully drawing us in to face it. Her approach is at once intimate and non-intrusive. Sometimes the revelations are shocking, and yet we nod in recognition of what feels true. She does this partly through an attention to detail that is compassionate, but realistic. In “The Good Mother Hides from Photographers” we are given the image of her daughter’s face, “stolen,” rolled up and dropped on doorsteps, “in late editions”
to each waiting neighbor, all of whom
are quoted passionately as saying,
“She comes from a good family.
We don’t understand.”
She also does it with a touch of humor. Her attention to detail opens us up to the unexpected, and sometimes darkly humorous, as in her rumination on weddings held at a local institution here in central Pennsylvania, “Clyde Peeling’s Reptile Land.” Or she delights us with a random occurrence as in the following shorter piece “Anachronism.”
Amidst the common and not-so-common personal injuries and illnesses, including multiple trips to the Emergency Room, our household and friendship circle had been shaken by several tragedies since this summer, a diagnosis of cancer, and several deaths, including a close friend’s suicide.
As our household recovers from those things that did not kill us, I reject the idea that we are made stronger by them. More honest is the realism shown by Marjorie’s poems, that facing the dark dangers of the world for what they are we find comfort, sometimes in small gestures like the reaching out of a hand long after the funeral. As in Marjorie’s poem about her husband’s weathering of a heart attack, we say, “Look, the horizon is even / and waiting; it’s time / to get living again.”
These tragedies leave us worn, tired and wounded. Some of them we conquer; some pass on their own, and some leave us forever changed, but generally, except for some aches and scar tissue, they do leave us. And Maddox reminds us of that too.
Life often takes us to places we hadn’t planned. We set down roots, raise a family in a town we never intended to stay in. Or we find something different and more nourishing than what we once thought was love. In “Anniversary Coffee” the poet writes “You are / not what I ordered but what I order now.”
That quiet observance of what is there beyond the pain is how Maddox gives us hope. We acknowledge that life goes on whether we plan it or not, and there is such potential in acceptance, not resignation but growth and adaptation. The opening of the eyes to what is beautiful in the world, that’s where this book leaves me. What a delight to recognize what is right before me in the midst of, in spite of, or maybe, surprisingly–dare I say it?–sometimes as a result of the pain. The book’s final poem, “A.M. : Inside and Out” drops me back, despite it all, “into the wonderfully brightening world.”
Do yourself a kindness. Who says you cannot buy a present for yourself this year? Get Local News from Someplace Else, by Marjorie Maddox.
- “Meteorology,” a poem by Marjorie Maddox (dadpoet.wordpress.com)
- Going Back In Our Time Machines (thebluecollarartist.com)
- July Poetry Pick, Local News from Someplace Else (thescrapperpoet.wordpress.com)
- Poetry Classroom: Meteorology (tweetspeakpoetry.com)